English Editing

here I will attach a file named ( ROUGH 2 Final 22) this is my rough draft. The professor asked me to analyze an article that I will give you the link for it. The due date for that was yesterday. She gave me a feedback on that with some comments. I should fix the essay with her comments so. My argument in the essay that I chose from the article was (We cannot truly know freedom, nor understand absolute liberty, without wilderness. The wild will exist long after human civilization.)

 This is my argument in the essay and I agreed with the writer Mincy

This is the link for the original article 

http://naturewriting.com/what-i-have-learned-from-nature/

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Here is the Rough Draft file and pictures of the comments she gave me 

So please read her comments carefully and then fix the essay step by step. please do not write anything NEW because the professor she already has one copy of my essay. 

The words should be not under 1000 words and maximum of 1100 words.

Try to NOT use a high level of grammar and vocabulary because I am non-native speaker

Please if you have any question contact me here As soon As you can ! 

thanks

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Here is the picture of the 7 or 8 questions that you will answer after you editing the assignment with her comments so 

1- fix the essay with her comments and do not change the argument or change all ideas

2- read the instructions on this picture I attached on this email and answer it by comment it in Word