Hello, I would like you to revise punctuation, tenses and other about grammar for my essay It was at the end of the first match in the city

Hello, I would like you to revise punctuation, tenses and other about grammar for my essay

It was at the end of the first match in the city tournament, we were taking a lead, but I was nervous to stand on the batter box because I did not make any hits in that game yet. When I realized, the counts were already two strikes. I became more nervous but I thought the pitcher must be more nervous than me because they are losing. When I thought that, my fighting spirit got fire and decided to swing the bat as strong as I can. When the pitcher throws the ball to me, I could not see the ball but I just swung the bat as I decided. After a metallic sound, I realized the ball went to a hole between third and left were positioning. I ran as fast as I could until my coach would stop me. When I was making a curb though running second base, I saw the ball that I hit went beyond left. I thought the ball might had bounded and gone over the head of left guy. I kept running and I really noticed my heart started to beat faster and faster.