Hi. I really really need your help with my academic paper(attach file) it is 99% done, i just would like you to try "rewrite" it in some other words,...

Hi.

I really really need your help with my academic paper(attach file) it is 99% done, i just would like you to try "rewrite" it in some other words, check grammar and writing structure consistency. because most of the information  were copied from different websites, journal articles etc.  and by reading and mixing all that information, heres the result.

it is like my final "exam", so just in case if a teacher  decides to check it on plagiarism, there won't be any problems.