I am looking for revision of the final draft. Below is feedback from the professor.  Almost all of your paragraph end with cited content and an in-text citation.  Don't do that. Always add a comment t

I am looking for revision of the final draft. Below is feedback from the professor. 

1. Almost all of your paragraph end with cited content and an in-text citation.  Don't do that. Always add a comment that provides context to the cited content.  What's here is very solid but tweaking just as what I've noted is needed.  If you add these comments, you'll find that the flow of your paper improves