I need the paper to be edited and the one source changed. Plus the checklist worksheet. Your argument is coming together well. You have strong paraphrases. Short-burst quotations are also required for

I need the paper to be edited and the one source changed. Plus the checklist worksheet. Your argument is coming together well. You have strong paraphrases. Short-burst quotations are also required for support. I will be looking for one to two short-burst quotations per page within your revision. Great sources for the most part! Web sites are not allowed for support. You will need to remove the First Concepts source.