i need you help to revise this paper，i attach the sample, follow format to revise, and add one page to expand this paper has 4 pages， revise 3 pages and write 1 pageintroduction: one paragraphBack

i need you help to revise this paper，i attach the sample, follow format to revise, and add one page to expand this paper has 4 pages， revise 3 pages and write 1 page

introduction: one paragraph

Background: summary, problem

Alternatives: at least three, solve problems 

Propose solution: choose alternatives, some paragraphs(less than alternatives) explain those solutions, don’t add something brand new

Recommendations: ensure very solutions work well, four or five, some ideas, make sure do not happen again

References: evidences, can use the text book, research

Times new Roman 

Size 12

Double spaced

this is my topic:  

https://mitsloan.mit.edu/LearningEdge/entrepreneurship/Pakistan/Pages/Pakistan-A-Story-of-Technology-Entrepreneurs-and-Global-Networks.aspx

i have already 3  alternatives ， If you can do it according to the above, of course, if you have any better direct changes, you will be fine.