I wrote about my favorite movie and why?

I wrote about my favorite movie and why? it should be in an essay form but it is for discussion board. My professor is really stringent about grammar. please check its grammar.

From all the movies I have watched in the past year, "The Salesman" was my favorite movie. The genre of this movie is thriller and drama, and it directed by Asghar Farhadi who is also a Persian film director and screenwriter. This movie was captured in Tehran, Iran and its language is Persian but it has English and French subtitles. Shahab Hosseini and Taraneh Alidoosti, who are two popular actor and actress in Iran, are starring in this movie. This movie won Academy Award for the best foreign language. The story of movie is about married couples, who are amateur actor and actress, starring in a production of "Death of a Salesman" and how their lives changed when they moved into a new home that used to be occupied by a prostitute.  

           Personally, my favorite film genres are drama and thriller, also I like movies which reflect a particular society of people. So, the first reason that I like this movie is because of the way Mr. Farhadi displays the Persian society. Another reason is because of the performance of Shahab Hosseini that makes "The Salesman" movie remarkable. There is a connection between this movie and the play "Death of a Salesman", so if the audience have seen the play "Death of a Salesman", the movie is more interesting for them. Another thing that I like about this movie is its title which completely matches with the story of the film. Furthermore, "The Salesman" is a foreign movie worth to watch because it introduces the Persian culture and their society to the audience.