Mayela Cardona 06/24/2014 CCR092C14 William Rogers ? ? ? Comparison and Contrast Essay ?

I am currently writing an essay and I am in need of revising one I have already written the professor left me this feed back in the grading section. I would like to improve my grade so I really need help revising it and adding things I might have missed.Professor feedback :Your introduction/thesis does a good job of putting the two essays “in conversation” with each other, but remember it’s also the job of your thesis to lay out the “subtopics’ of the body paragraphs to follow.As for those body paragraphs, I think this is really where you run in to trouble. In a compare-and-contrast essay, you need to be discussing both texts! You really only address David Silverman’s essay, which means there is very little comparing and contrasting of this essay to Peter Bergman’s actually happening in the essay.