ntroduction Paragraph 5/5 Thesis statement 2/4 Topic Sentences (3) 9/10 Evidence/quote selection 10/15 Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary, transitions 8/10 Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10 Analysis supp

ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions:  -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%.  This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.