Please make the necessary adjustments based on the comments listed below MBA 700 Strategic Analysis Final Project Rubric feedback:

Please make the necessary adjustments based on the comments listed below

MBA 700 Strategic Analysis Final Project Rubric feedback: ou have selected an organization and have provided analysis of its strategy-creation. You provided most of the key elements for this assignment. You provided examples to illustrate each component relevant to this assignment. There were areas that needed strengthening and more detail.

You want to only provide an introduction and thesis statement in your introduction paragraph. Keep the research and resources in the body paragraphs.

Inquiry and Analysis:

In each paragraph you want to show an introduction to a topic with detail and conclusion.

 The analysis you provided shows that you have a good grasp of some of the concepts. I would like to see a more thorough understanding of multiple concepts. 

Milestone Submission and Incorporation of Feedback: You are receiving full credit for instructor feedback.

Critical Thinking: There were areas within your paper that need more follow through and detail after your statements. Think about the who, what, where, when, and how questions after your research is integrated so that all of the details are covered. 

Research:

You did a good job with your research but you want to incorporate a couple more scholarly resources to add depth and breadth to your compare and contrast in your research. 

Writing (Mechanics/ Citations):

In scholarly papers and APA avoid the phrases "I think" or "I believe" as we want the reader to see your work as scholarly which means objective review of scholarly resources embedded in your work to show credibility.

You do not want to add research elements in your introduction paragraph. Push all of the cited material and research to the body paragraphs. Follow APA