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Please read the uploaded paper and write on the paper what should be corrected or if its alright , need commas, or is it talking about what they are trying to say just like you are a teacher writing statement boxes that need to be corrected
This paper should have comment boxes on the right side that states what is wrong or etc. Also make sure this paper is following the guidelines that I uploaded also