this is for Catherine Owens

The first attachment is basically the advocacy letter assignments what the professor is asking for. and the second attachment is the letter i wrote and the comments she left me after she gave me a grade.

the link below, she suggested us to read it before writing the letter. I guess to have an idea of an advocate letter. 

http://www.nytimes.com/2013/10/11/opinion/fed-up-with-fund-raising-for-my-kids-school.html

The link below The links below will give you forms of business letters and clear instructions for writing them. 

https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/BusinessLetter.html

please let me know if you have any questions! THANK YOU