two paragraphs about my favorite place. I already wrote two paragraphs.

I started with the introduction and the first paragraph to make it easier to know what I want.

revise the introduction and the first paragraph, and then write two paragraphs I wanted to be at least page and a half.

you can use your imagination to talk about my favorite place which is my apartment. noting specifically sensory details: sights, sounds, smells, feels, tastes..