english

teacher comment:

this is a general report about marketing someone elses's product. Per the directions the analysis is to focus on some initiative you have developed and implemented for your hypothetical business.

One of the reasons you are earning low scores on these assignments is that the work submitted does not follow the directions.

I mentioned the tutoring center previously. I would advise making an appointment and first going through the directions with the tutor. That might help your comprehension of what is required and how to achieve it.

Note too that the overall report exceeds the 1000 word limit by more than 400 words. Please understand that being able to present your ideas within given parameters is one aspect of effective writing