This assignment needs to be revised the introductionare :...............;you have a great start here but I am going to send this submission back to you for further revision. Namely I see a lot of your

This assignment needs to be revised the introductionare :...............;you have a great start here but I am going to send this submission back to you for further revision. Namely I see a lot of your points without much context which may not make sense to a less technical reader. This submission should be a narrative essay that flows and has sufficient context to tell viewers what each of these components are.