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From 3 article: "Is google making us stupid?
From 3 article: "Is google making us stupid?", "Leave your name at the border", "The rake: A few scenes from my childhood" answer the following questions:
1. What is the point the author is making about the subject (This is a question about theme and message -- not thesis).
2. What is the thesis -- if it is not explicit, you write one for the essay.
3. Find six examples of details of narration.
4. Where could the author expand the details?
5. What is the order of events?
6. What is missing from the essay?
7. What is the essay's greatest strength.